Stay in the moment

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YOUR CHALLENGE

Make a note of your current word count on the piece of writing you used in the previous lesson.

Consider rephrasing/pruning so that you stay in the moment – and so does your reader.

Software tips

  • If you are using Scrivener, use the corkboard to review the synopsis for each scene. Make sure you reveal information
    NB You can list all forms of a verb, but make sure you choose ‘Any’ rather than ‘Exact’ in the search options.
  • If you are using ProWritingAid, run the Overuse report and check whether you have used verbs like ‘to feel’ or ‘to seem’.

Keeping track

  • How many words did you start with?
  • How many words did you end with?
  • How many words did you cut in total?
  • What percentage is that of your original word count? (Number cut / Number at start x 100)